TRES TRES URGENT probleme en anglais SCP URGENT !!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Bonjour,

Matière / Niveau: anglais 4 e

Problème ou exercice: dans mon texte il y a 12 erreurs de temps

Où j'en suis: j 'ai trouvé la moitié il sont dèéjà corrigé sur mon texte

Mes questions: aide moi svp


Charles Dickens was an English novelist who lived from 1812 to 1870 . His parents weren't rich and charles doesn't received a very good education .In fact , he does not have a completly happy childhood . When he was 12 , his father went to prison because he owed money. Charles worked in a factory for a few months until his father come out of prison . He hate his work in the factory , and was very unhappy. At 15 he started to work as an office boy for some lawyers in London .At 22 he became a journalist for a London newpaper , and two years later he marry the daughter of a magazine editor . Dickens worked extremely hard and wrote a lot of successuful novels and short stories . He understandood social probelms very well and try to change them by describing them in his work . Dickens eventually left his ife in 1858 . In the 1860s he completed two more novels but he doesn't finished his last novel before his death in 1870 .


Meric d 'avance

Le prétérit de "do(does)", c' est "did"

Aloha,

1/ évite les multi posts .......

2/ voilà les fautes :


Charles Dickens was an English novelist who lived from 1812 to 1870 . His parents weren't rich and charles doesn't received a very good education .In fact , he does not have a completly happy childhood . When he was 12 , his father went to prison because he owed money. Charles worked in a factory for a few months until his father come out of prison . He hate his work in the factory , and was very unhappy. At 15 he started to work as an office boy for some lawyers in London .At 22 he became a journalist for a London newpaper , and two years later he marry the daughter of a magazine editor . Dickens worked extremely hard and wrote a lot of successuful novels and short stories . He understandood social problems very well and try to change them by describing them in his work . Dickens eventually left his life in 1858 . In the 1860s he completed two more novels but he doesn't finished his last novel before his death in 1870 .


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Jib

Problème ou exercice: dans mon texte il y a 12 erreurs de temps

il en manquait 5 .... mais bravo Jib c'est juste

Questions:

were
received
does
come
hate
become
marry
understood
try
have
leaved
finished

REPONSES:
was
receive
did
came
hated
became
married
understanded
tried
had
left
finish

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(Modifié par ernestine le 04-02-2008 à 21:37)

Charles Dickens were an English novelist who lived from 1812 to 1870.

Le were s'utilise sur la deuxiéme personne du singulier et les pronoms personnels pluriels.

In fact, he does not have a completely happy childhood.

Le principe de la formation, c'est la répétition...
Pourquoi le présent? Il me semble que Jib' a déjà corrigé cette faute de temps.

until his father come out of prison.

Faute de temps (encore).

He hate his work in the factory,

Faute de temps (toujours), et on dit "at the factory".

At 15 he started work as an office boy for some lawyers in London.

Trad: à 15 ans, il commença travail comme garçon de bureau pour quelques avocats à Londres.
C'est traduit du roumain?

At 22 he become a journalist for a London newspaper, and two years later he marry the daughter of a magazine editor.

Fautes de temps (ça devient pénible).

He understanded social problems very well and try to change them by describing them in his work.

understand est un verbe irrégulier dont la racine est stand plus une faute de temps (try).

Dickens and his wife have ten children

Faute de quoi à ton avis?

Dickens eventually leaved his wife in 1858.

Leave est un verbe irrégulier

he didn't finished

C'est nouveau comme conjugaison? Prétérit plus participe passé, ça n'existe pas.

"Matière / Niveau: anglais 4 e

Problème ou exercice: dans mon texte il y a 12 erreurs de temps "
perso je trouve ca clair et du coup ben on cherche des fautes de temps non ???

sinon mea culpa j'ai fait le copier coller du texte après et il etait bourré de fautes alors j'ai effacé !

bonne soiree