ma traductuion d anglais a verifier c est tres important

Bonjour tout le monde, ja i fait une lettre en anglais et je voudrait que quelqu'un e corrige car il y a des phrase que je ne sais pas dire voila je vous remercie



Dear mr jones,

my name is Boxer,i am a horse.i am writng because the life conditions in the farmer are very difficult because their is lot of inequalities between animals.Pigs bcome a dictators.They all run the farm , they instituted their regulations que tous le monde doit suivre meme si nous ne sommes pas d'accord.Animal's are furious because a life in the farm are miserable.Their is peu de nourritures and the farm est mal propre .Pigs sont tres nombreux but ne participent pas au fonctionnement de la ferme .Me and my friend ont fait tourner le moulin all day.you tired and nous souffrons beaucoup de ce dur trvail. Animal's are malheureux. so we organized un rassemblement with pig do not listenning et ne veulent rien changer. animal's think a new rebellion pour la paix in the farm



voila il y a des mots francais je ne sais pas les dire en anglais si vous pourriez m aider ...

je vous remercie d avance





Ajout du 28-02-2008 à 21:50:

voila j ai refaitmon expression pourriez vous me la corriger merci

Dear mr jones,

my name is Boxer,i am a horse.i am writng because the life conditions in the farmer are very difficult because their is lot of inequalities between animals.Pigs bcome a dictators.They all run the farm , they instituted their regulations que tous le monde doit suivre meme si nous ne sommes pas d'accord.Animal's are furious because a life in the farm are miserable.Their is peu de nourritures and the farm est mal propre .Pigs sont tres nombreux but ne participent pas au fonctionnement de la ferme .Me and my friend ont fait tourner le moulin all day.you tired and nous souffrons beaucoup de ce dur trvail. Animal's are malheureux. so we organized un rassemblement with pig do not listenning et ne veulent rien changer. animal's think a new rebellion pour la paix in the farm

I am writing to you because (the life conditions) in the farmer(?)(farm?) are really difficults. There is a lot off inequallities between the animals.Pigs becames dictators.
(...) regulations and everybody had to follow them even if we are not agree(...)because the life in farm are miserable.there is a few food and farm is dirty.Pigs are many and they don't help at good mechanism of farm.me and my friends have (faire tourner le moulin?????) everyday.we are tired and we are affected by this hard work.Animals are unhappy.So we (have a gather)with pigs who didn't listen us and didn't want change anything..Animals are thinking for a new rebellion to have peace on farm.

Je suis pas sûre pour tout du tout alors fais verifier quand même

non cest bon c est resolu
merci quand meme