Salut à tous, pour Mercredi j'ai eu une rédaction a faire, comme je ne suis pas très bon je souhaiterai avoir des corrections sur le texte que j'ai écrit :
- Halo, Helen.
- Where are you then?
- I am at the office, there is a power outage, but why you talk funny?
- I talk funny because I am Frantic, but I am confident that you would be alive.
- Why are you reassured that I am alive, what happens?
- Two planes have slowed in the twin towers, and the sixtieth floor of the North tower, not far from your desk.
- What? What happens?
- Two planes have slowed in the towers, the towers are on fire, people jumping on the upper floors, and it is horrible.
- Oh! There must be a lot of injuries; I must to help.
- Certainly not, on television, they say that the explosion killed planes all persons at the level of its floors.
- Maybe there are survivors, I have to help the firefighter.
- No, I worry there will begs as p, think of the children and to me, if something happen it could not rely.
But I must help the firefighters, at least if I die I will always like.
Merci pour vos réponses !!!!
