exposé en anglais

Bonjour,

j'ai un expose oral a faire en anglais est ce que quelqu'un peut me dire si mon texte est juste.

"I’m going to talk to you about a film which is well known to film buff: Fight club. The movie fight club is an adaptation of the novel fight club writing by Chuck Palahniuk in 1996. The film came out to the cinema in 1999. He was directed by David Fincher and produced by Arnon Milchan. The film whose production budget was 63 million dollars bring their in more than 100 million dollars. The main actors are Edward Norton, Brad Pitt and Helena Carter.

The narrator, acted by Edward Norton, leads an ordinary life in a consumer society. He is a nameless automobile company employee. He is a chronic insomnia and tries to escape his boring life. He assists many supports groups and thanks to that he found sleep again. The narrator’s routine is disrupted when he begins to notice another impostor, Marla Singer, at the groups he goes to and his insomnia returns. During a flight for a business trip, the narrator meets Tyler Durden, a charismatic soap salesman who has a twisted philosophy.
The narrator arrives home to find his apartment has been destroyed by an explosion. He calls Tyler and will move in Tyler’s house. Together they decide to create an illegal fight club whose rules put up into the world. The first rule is “you do not talk about fight club”. Nevertheless this club takes back new recruits every day. In this place, the narrator will find his virility, trade and communication.
Tyler becomes a leader preaching speech of rebellion facing the effected society and urging members of fight club to accomplish terrorist’s acts.
He creates the Chaos plan whose ambition are beyond the narrator.
Tyler vanished suddenly and the narrator goes in search of him. In this way he discovers that Tyler and him they do one."

merci

I’m going to talk to you about a film which is well known to film buff: Fight club

not false but pretty heavy in the structure.
Here is what I'd say: "I'm going to present you a well known movie, Fight Club."

The movie fight club is an adaptation of the novel fight club writing by Chuck Palahniuk in 1996.

A bunch of mistakes plus : Don't you ever read movie credits in english?

fight club movie is based on a novel written by Chuck Palahniuk...

Remember that Palahniuk is from Ukrainian ancestry and his name's pronounced Pôlahnouk.

The film came out to the cinema in 1999.

"to come out" ne veut pas dire "sortir" au sens sortie ciné.
dans le cas des prod audiovisuelles, on dit "to release", les cinemas aux USA, se dit Theaters.

The film whose production budget was 63 million dollars bring their in more than 100 million dollars.

Bon, je vais arrêter ici parce que le reste est plein de fautes de temps. Quand vous causez français, vous ne dites jamais "je vais au cinéma il y a deux jours"? Alors, serait-ce trop demander d'utiliser le passé dans une autre langue quand les circonstances s'y prétent?

je rajoute ceci:

He is a chronic insomnia

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Traduction: il est une insomnie chronique... Ben, je savais pas qu'on pouvait...

bin merci quand même.je savais que j'étais une quiche en anglais mais j'ai personne pour m'aider.

I'm going to present you a well known movie, Fight Club. The movie Fight Club is an adaptation of the novel "fight club" written by Chuck Palahniuk in 1996. The film was released in theaters in 1999. He was directed by David Fincher and produced by Arnon Milchan. The film 's budget was 63 million dollars and it brought them more than 100 million dollars. The main actors are Edward Norton, Brad Pitt and Helena Carter.

The narrator, acted by Edward Norton, leads an ordinary life in a consumer society. He is a nameless automobile company employee. He is a chronical insomniac and tries to escape from his boring life. He assists many supports groups and thanks to that he found sleep again<<Je ne sais pas ce que tu veux dire là >>. The narrator’s routine is disrupted when he begins to notice another impostor, Marla Singer, at the groups he goes to and his insomnia come back. During a flight for a business trip, the narrator meets Tyler Durden, a charismatic soap salesman who has a twisted philosophy.
The narrator arrives home to find his apartment destroyed by an explosion. He calls Tyler and will move in Tyler’s house. Together they decide to create an illegal fight club whose rules put up into the world<<mets moi tes idées en français stp >>. The first rule is “you do not talk about fight club”. Nevertheless this club takes back new recruits every day. In this place, the narrator will find his virility, trade and communication.
Tyler becomes a leader preaching speech of rebellion facing the effected society and urges members of fight club to accomplish terrorist’s acts.
He creates the Chaos plan whose ambition are beyond the narrator.
Tyler vanished suddenly and the narrator goes in search of him. In this way he discovers that Tyler and him form only one people."

Voila ,je pense que c'est à peu près correct..

09-12-2007 à 17:42, thana :
bin merci quand même.je savais que j'étais une quiche en anglais mais j'ai personne pour m'aider.

PARDON? Je corrige et j'aide les gens à améliorer leur Anglais, je ne fais pas leurs devoirs...