Anglais

Bonjour, le sujet de mon anglais était "écrire une discussion avec votre meilleur ami qui a rendez vous pour un entretient crucial"


John - Hello, how are you Kevan?
Kevan I'm fine and you?
J - I'm stress, tomorrow I've a important job interview
K - Oh good, in what activity?
J - In cellphone, It's for a job of cellphone's vendor in a shop in london.
K - Keep cool!
J - I'm hesitating how to get dressed
K - I think you should dress correctly, don't wear jean's or not tie, it's a job for young people, you don't?
J - I do, It's a good Idea. What type of question do you think they could ask me?
K - In the first time, inform you about cellphones, 3g, Gsm, all this. And after, he surely appreciate that you know the situation of the company, his competiter or his economic situation.
J - Thank you, I will search that in my computer
K - Okay, and don't forget to show that you like speak, you are decontract and can explicate rapidly a lot of things about cellphone with clients. You can also do humor.
J - Thank you very mutch! It's not a problem. Oh sorry it's five a clock, i've to return at home, Goodbye!
K - Goodbye and don't forget to power down your cellphone during the job interview haha



Ajout du 04-01-2008 à 15:05:

S'il vous plait

salut

John - Hello, how are you Kevan?
Kevan - I'm fine and you?
J - I'm stressed, tomorrow I will have an important job interview
K - Oh good, in what activity?
J - In cellphone, It's for a job of cellphone's vendor in a shop in london.
K - Keep cool!
J - I'm hesitating how to get dressed [mouai]
K - I think you should dress correctly, don't wear jean's or not tie, it's a job for young people, don't you ?
J - I do, It's a good Idea. What type of question do you think they will ask to me?
K - In first time, inform you about cellphones, 3g, Gsm, all this. And after, he certainely appreciate that you know the situation of the company, his competiter or his economic situation.
J - Thank you, I will search that in my computer
K - Okay, and don't forget to show that you like speak, you are decontract and can explicate rapidely a lot of things about cellphones with clients. You can also do humor.
J - Thank you very much! It's not a problem. Oh sorry it's five a clock, i've to return at home, Goodbye!
K - Goodbye and don't forget to power down your cellphone during the job interview !!

voilà j'ai corrigé quelques fautes mais je ne sis pas sur que ça soit encore tout juste
attend le passage de quelq'un d'autre

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moi j'ai une rédaction et le sujet c'est : Something made you fuious/sad/happy today . Write a page in an imaginary diary.

donc svp aidez moi
merci d'avance

Bah c'est pas si compliqué que ca! de quelle facon tu veux qu'on t'aide?

aidadu67 donne nous ce que tu a fait et on te dira si c'est bien

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04-01-2008 à 15:16, Piouzz :
salut

John - Hello, how are you Kevan?
Kevan - I'm fine and you?
J - I'm stressed, tomorrow I will have an important job interview
K - Oh good, in what activity?
J - In cellphone, It's for a job of cellphone's vendor in a shop in london.
K - Keep cool!
J - I'm hesitating how to get dressed [mouai]
K - I think you should dress correctly, don't wear jean's or not tie, it's a job for young people, don't you ?
J - I do, It's a good Idea. What type of question do you think they will ask to me?
K - In first time, inform you about cellphones, 3g, Gsm, all this. And after, he certainely appreciate that you know the situation of the company, his competiter or his economic situation.
J - Thank you, I will search that in my computer
K - Okay, and don't forget to show that you like speak, you are decontract and can explicate rapidely a lot of things about cellphones with clients. You can also do humor.
J - Thank you very much! It's not a problem. Oh sorry it's five a clock, i've to return at home, Goodbye!
K - Goodbye and don't forget to power down your cellphone during the job interview !!

voilà j'ai corrigé quelques fautes mais je ne sis pas sur que ça soit encore tout juste
attend le passage de quelq'un d'autre

@++

Merci bcp

Salut puccinox ...alors :

John - Hello, how are you Kevan?
Kevan I'm fine and you?
J - I'm stressed because tomorrow I've got an important job interview
K - Oh good, What activity in?
J - In cellphone, It's for a job of cellphone's vendor in a shop in london.
K - Keep cool!
J - I'm hesitating in how to get dressed
K - I think you should be dressed correctly, don't wear jean's or a tie, it's a job for young people, you don't? ("you don't" c'est carrement faux ^^)
J - It's a good Idea. What type of question do you think they could ask me?
K - First, inform you about cellphones, 3g, Gsm, all this. And after, he will surely appreciate that you know the situation of the company, his competiter or his economic situation.
J - Thank you, I will search that in my computer
K - Okay, and don't forget to show that you like speaking,and that you are decontracted and can explicate rapidly a lot of things about cellphone with clients. You can do humor as well ("as well" qui veut dire pareil que "also" mais c'est plus litteraire ^^)
J - Thank you very much! It's not a problem. Oh sorry it's five a clock, i've to return at home, Goodbye!
K - Goodbye and don't forget to shut down your cellphone during the job interview haha.

Voili voulou...je me suis inscrite y'a 5min et je sais pas trop si les mots que j'ai corrigé seront bien en bleu...bref ^^