J'ai repris le texte, mais je n'est pas trouvée beaucoup de changement....:
On saturday, December 22nd I went to Chamonix in Haute-Savoie. I skied during six days with my friends and my parents. I decorated the Christmas tree. To the Christmas I ate oyster, salmon and ......[comment on dit "foie gras"]. I spent my Christmas with my parents and my driends in the mountain. The weather was beautiful and there was a lot of snow. I was great. I received some money end dress. With the money I will buy dress.
On Thursday, December 27th I came back at home. I went to my grand parents, to my gotmother, to my godfather, to my brother and to my cousins. I helped my mother in her company (entreprise) during two days. The night of December 31st, I had the party with my neighbours and my friends. I ate a delicious meal with my friends. At midnight it was the holiday, there was many firecracker.
Ajout du 08-01-2008 à 13:06:
Ox6GN tous mes verbes sont au simple past sauf un ( avec l'argent je vais m'acheté des habilles) c'est tout tu peux me le corriger STP merci d'avance..
On saturday, December 22nd I went to Chamonix in Haute-Savoie. I skied during six days with my friends and my parents. I decorated the Christmas tree. To the Christmas I ate oyster, salmon and ......[fat liver]. I spent my Christmas with my parents and my friends in the mountain. The weather was beautiful and there was a lot of snow. It was great. I received some money and clothes. With this money I went to buy clothes.
On Thursday, December 27th I came back at home. I went to my grand parents, to my gotmother, to my godfather, to my brother and to my cousins. I helped my mother in her company (entreprise) during two days. The night of December 31st, I had the party with my neighbours and my friends. I ate a delicious meal with my friends. At midnight it was the holiday, there was many firecracker.
"At midnight it was the holiday" => que veux-tu dire ?
Entre Strasbourgeois, on doit s'aider ;)
[ Ce message a été modifié par : : Ox6GN le 08-01-2008 15:32 ]
je dois le rendre jeudi et demain c'est les soldes donc je vais mettre au passé c'est plus simple...vu que la prof veut un texte au simple past....vous pensez que je peux l'écrire au propre là ou il y a encore des fautes ?
Ajout du 08-01-2008 à 18:23:
je peux même dire yesterday I went to buy clothes because it was the sales.
NON !! là tu dit que tu est DEJA allé acheté des habit alors que baby67 VA le faire.
c'est plutôt "with this money I will buy clothes"
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Alors là ... Elle raconte ce qu'elle a fait, le texte est donc au passé. Ce que tu dis est illogique dans le sens où, d'après toi, elle ira acheté les vêtements alors que si tu mets au futur, le texte doit être au présent, or ce n'est pas le cas ... "I will buy clothes" = "J'achèterai des vêtements". Est-ce logique, d'après toi ?
On saturday, December 22nd I went to Chamonix in Haute-Savoie. I skied during six days with my friends and my parents. I decorated the Christmas tree. On Christmas Eve I ate oyster, salmon and foie gras (il n'y a pas de traduction pour ça car spécialité française...). I spent my Christmas holidays with my parents and my friends in the mountain. The weather was beautiful and there was a lot of snow. It was great. I received some money and clothes. With this money I will buy new clothes.
On Thursday, December 27th I came back at home. I went to my grand parents', to my godmother's ( 's = chez // I suis allé chez ma marraine), to my godfather's, to my brother's and to my cousins'. I helped my mother in her company (entreprise) during two days. On the night of December 31st, I had the party with my neighbours and my friends. I ate a delicious meal with my friends. At midnight the party began, there was many firecracker. ( so = there were many firecrackers )
ok merci beaucoup vous penssez il est bon le texte là ?
Ajout du 08-01-2008 à 22:32:
Jib' j'ai pas compris : there was many firecracker. ( so = there were many firecrackers ) c'est quoi la différence il faut que je mette la quelle phrase ? Merci de bien vouloir me répondre et je vous remercie beaucoup......
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